Monday, October 18, 2010

Island Man

Island Man (for a Caribbean island man in London who still wakes up to the sound of the sea)
by Grace Nichols
.
Morning
an island man wakes up
to the sound of blue surf
in his head
the steady breaking and wombing
wild seabirds
and fishermen pushing out to sea
the sun surfacing defiantly
from the east
of his small emerald island
.
He always comes back
groggily groggily
comes back to sands
of a grey metallic soar
to a surge of wheels
to dull North Circular roar
muffling muffling
his crumpled pillow waves
island man heaves himself
another London day


I think the 10 most important words are 
1.Island man
2.blue surf
3.wild seabirds
4.sun surfacing
5.emerald island
6.come back
7.grey metallic
8.dull
9.north circular
10.pillow waves
 

 
I would really like to wake up one day and be like "oh wow how did I get here" But where I want to wake up it would be Spain. It looks so cool there and Jamaica.

Sunday, October 17, 2010

4321 khalefa poetry

3 Things That Khaleefa Did Or Spoke About That You Can Use To Help Inspire And Develop Your Own Poetry.
What Inspired me was the way he preformed.
Also how he talked about his "crush" in one of his poems and how he felt that was OK to share the poem and the story with us . It makes me feel that it's OK to express your feelings to others and in poems.
2 Questions You Have For Khaleefa.
Do you ever share your poetry or raps with your family and friends before you perform it?
Does reading poetry help you write poetry?
1 Sentence Summary Of Why Khaleefa Is A Good Role Model For Youth
Khaleefa is a good role model for youth because he understands youth and how to talk with them in a way which youth understands.

Thursday, October 14, 2010

What To Be For Hallowen

Hey I don't know what to be for Halloween so I that I would ask you guys. Here are my choices a monkey,
a ninja
a pumpkin
and a tomatoe
Please comment and say what you think that I should be for Halloween.Thanks

What Should I Be For Hallowen

I was wondering of what to be for hallowen. So I have some suggestions I want to see what people think please comment of what I should be.Here are some ideas a pumkin,
a monkey, 
a ninga

Sunday, October 10, 2010

Dance

Hey I was boered so I thought I would talk about our school DANCE. For grade sevens it's realy exciting because it's there first time.But for grade eights it's realy realy exciting because it is so FUN.Everyone is so excited and can not wait. It's dark and there's colourful light s on the celling and the music is very very very loud but its awsome. I can't wait.